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Oct 01, 2025
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THE FARMER IN THE SELL
The farmer feels dumb, he was played
he was duped by a conman's charade
he ignored the alarm
now he's losing his farm
what a charm for a corporate raid!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: ..one should wonder if these situations are by design..hmm. I normally don't entertain conspiracy theories, but when something doesn't make sense, it makes one wonder
Style/Type: Structured: Western
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Michael Anthony
6 months 2 weeks ago
Yep! And they voted against…
Yep! And they voted against the very people who work their farms, too. Difficult to find empathy here.
Ruby Lord
6 months 2 weeks ago
Your ditty explains it…
Your ditty explains it plainly. Shame you weren't made president then all that sh!t going down wouldn't hurt people. I like your poem, good flow, almost a limerick worth reading. Ruby xx