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Nov 18, 2019
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Falling
The moment when
Everything is
F
A
L
L
I
N
G
Apart
But yet it’s
F
A
L
L
I
N
G
Right
Into place
— Defygravity, Nov 18, 2019
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Temporal Fugue
6 years 7 months ago
Hahah! All too true DF! :D
Hahah! All too true DF! :D
Words pieced and placed, so perfectly
as poetry
embraced
Defygravity
6 years 7 months ago
Thank you!!! :)
Thank you!!! :)
Geezer
6 years 7 months ago
Welcome to Neopoet...
I like the form. A bit small and not much to critique. I hope that you find a voice here and look forward to seeing more of your work. ~ Geezer.
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Defygravity
6 years 7 months ago
Thank you I appreciate any
Thank you I appreciate any comments good or not! I look
Forward to sharing my work here!
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