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Feb 06, 2023
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Failure
As hard as I try I’m unsuccessful
Of amending my faults
Promises, words and prayers
Don’t yield successful results
But only continue to affirm my
Weaknesses and add to my
Grief and sadness
— Clentin, Feb 06, 2023
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RoseBlack
3 years 3 months ago
Clentin
Such a sad, honest write. We are all a work in progress and flawed. The fact that you keep trying to improve yourself says something! Good job.
Clentin Martin
3 years 3 months ago
Thank you. Just a comment on
Thank you. Just a comment on the difficulty improvement
Rosewood Apothecary
3 years 3 months ago
It takes time
I started “healing” like 3 years ago. It’s just a long process and it’s like playing a sport or an instrument, you have to practice and fail a lot before you get decent at it. Just hang in there.
Tim