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Evidence
Hate or fear without evidence
Is really just prejudice
Which is evil & manmade
& Needs to be thrown away
Critical thinking skills are non-negotiable
If you truly want to stop being gullible
2 men proved that empathy & facts
Are the best tools for getting
your humanity back
One wrote to a radio show
And put listeners of Superman in the know
Of the KKK 's codes and secret handshake
To strip them of their clandestine state
The other asked "how can you hate who you don't even know?"
& Engaged in civil discourse until they hung up their robes
Please remember these possible solutions,
For their results have repeatedly proven
That prejudice
only succeeds when you ignore the evidence
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Clentin Martin
4 weeks ago
Very nice poem.Welcome to…
Very nice poem.
Welcome to Neopoet, shadow poetry is a great tool to discover various poetic forms! Gives examples and examines the forms! Keep writing!
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