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Jun 20, 2024
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Every drop
My body cries
For you
Every day
I miss you,
With every pore,every tear,every breath
God,just give back my Koko
I'll behave
Just give me back my mother
— kowque, Jun 20, 2024
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1 year 11 months ago
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
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John Leslie O'Kelley
1 year 11 months ago
kowque
Separation is hard, but I hope that writing takes away some of your sorrow!
RoseBlack
1 year 11 months ago
I hope
You find solace in your writing. Grief and missing someone is challenging and we all need an outlet from it. Take care of yourself and take this time to heal. Hugs
Candlewitch
1 year 11 months ago
Dear Koki,
I agree with Carrie's thoughts and advice on this. Try to concentrate on the good memories and cherish them. I wish you all the best.
*hugs, Cat
Lavender
1 year 11 months ago
Every Drop
Hello, Koki,
I sense the heartache and pain. Like the other comments, I will add to the hope of peace and healing.
Thank you,
L
kowque
1 year 11 months ago
❤️
Thank you