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Mar 29, 2011
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ere heart trace
enact
this sun gown warms
streamer lightness
like a halo
adversity is empty
shelved with
motes of touch
I thought I knew
loves striations
falling like spring
snow
sedimentary values
I hear water trickling
and I can feel the falls
jagged rock and foam
freshets
the heart shaped sweetness
a glad smile
that lightness of being
and nights joy burns
like tracer rounds
my heart kicking
and I dream Im
hunting
I dream of forests
and rain at darkness
feel your small
palm against this pain
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
CCfire
15 years ago
Well I wish I'd written the
Well I wish I'd written the last stanza...small palm against this pain is a wonderful way to end this emotional journey through poetry here. I enjoy the way you use abstract thought with the emotions and feelings.
Nordic cloud
15 years ago
The halo
The halo
the moat
the aura of velvet gown
as the sun frames
the moon
and blazes the flowers
into a round of seasons...
"and nights joy burns
like tracer rounds
my heart kicking
and I dream Im
hunting"... I smiled specially at this verse
You are all man Steven.
Love from a female.