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Sep 18, 2023
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This poem is part of the challenge:
September 2023 Challenge Waiting to see the doctor
Endless Moments in the Waiting Room
In the sterile room,
Fleeting whispers dance,
Silence speaks volumes,
As minutes stretch, prance.
"Will time ever mend,
The clock's ceaseless cry?"
Frustration takes hold,
Time drips with a sigh.
Longing for solace,
Amidst restless minds,
Patience wears thin,
Anxious heart unwinds.
— Pipiabarn_Chet, Sep 18, 2023
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Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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