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Jul 23, 2011
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embrace me
as the sky fits the earth
you fill my begging bowl
you plunder my depths
with your naked embrace,
the warmth of a thousand suns
swirls under your
fingers,
you touch me honestly,
your arms enfold me like
tender mercy
your passion anoints me,
one armed, I can not fight back.
— Kailashana2, Jul 23, 2011
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: poem written in another group as a challenge for using embrace to convey a feeling of strength and protection;. of course, I had to put my own spin on it. ~A
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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raj
14 years 10 months ago
Anna
the sensual instinct is very perceptible in this write..