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Apr 29, 2022
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Elfchen 01____Proverb
Proverb
Wisdom workshop
Growing up culture
Pregnant of long sayings
Bellyful!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Babalola promio
3 years 6 months ago
This my first poem here, how
This my first poem here, how is it?
Candlewitch
3 years 6 months ago
hello and welcome
welcome to Neopoet. we are always glad to see a new member amongst our ranks! I'm not sure what your poem means. but I would like to learn. could you explain it to me, please? thanks.
*hugs, Cat
Ray Whitaker
3 years 6 months ago
WELCOME to the website!
Nice to see more folks from Africa.
I look forward to reading more of your work!
I had to look up "Elfchen". here is what I found: An "Elfchen" is similar to a Haiku in that it has a set form, however it is unique in that it has 11 words, the lines having 1-2-3-4-1 words, respectively.