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Editors in Love

She was talking about an old poem I wrote.
It was one about her, a love poem.

Looking at it now, in the current light,
we both felt it was overly sentimental.
Definitely not one of my best efforts.

I endeavored to try another.
One with beautiful lines and perfect words
placed just where they should be.

Just write about today, she said.
The stanzas are right here in front of us.

— Michael Anthony, Feb 26, 2026

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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