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May 24, 2020
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Drunku Haiku
Continual boozing -
Next year's prognostication:
Liver with bunions.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years 5 months ago
Nice...
but I think that if you are going to post Haiku, you should post at least three at a time. "Liver with bunions" Ha ! Funny, that. ~ Geezer.
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Edna Sweetlove
5 years 5 months ago
Length...
..isn't the only criterion.
Breadth counts too.
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Geezer
5 years 5 months ago
True...
most assuredly
Haiku is not only length
but 'tis also heft.
~ Geezer
Lavender
5 years 5 months ago
Drunku Haiku
Hi, Edna,
Your title is pretty ingenious!
Lavender
Edna Sweetlove
5 years 4 months ago
Thank you!
I was quite pleased with it, as the actress said to the bishop (with a smirk).
Edna Sweetlove
5 years 5 months ago
I am...
...flattered.