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Aug 28, 2020
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Dreamer Me
I'm always dreaming
every one here is reading
who
not me
but pushing down the stream
oldie me
all sansy
who will now take fancy
but
I await Gee
at times Stanly
casually drops in Ian
O what an IRONY
none is now reading me
How will I come first in Augustly poem
OUT of this WORLD
new one none read me
Judge will do hopefully
not fake me
of my cup poemey this
where is Ma'am
Gracy
— lovedly, Aug 28, 2020
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: AN INEXTINGUISHABLE POET YES 'TIS me
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
Lavender
5 years 11 months ago
Dreamer Me
Hi, Lovedly,
A very playful piece, I believe. Most of your poetry has several thoughts interconnecting, as does this one, it seems. Sansy guy, huh? I've learned a new word today, and I'm tickled that it rhymes with fancy.
Thank you!
L
lovedly
5 years 11 months ago
Sansy
how would you match it with
sexy
lol
lavy
Geezer
5 years 11 months ago
You have...
too much on your mind lovedly. ~ Gee.
.
lovedly
5 years 11 months ago
lol
Gee
as always
Pataphysique.C
5 years 10 months ago
Your poems
are always unique, with a kind of Steinesque running commentary, something of your own. I always know when looking up this great website that I am going to find something "you", rather than the product of chatroom, workshop groupthink.
lovedly
5 years 10 months ago
thanks for the drive in shall read u tooo
Steinesque running commentary meaning
pardonae my ignorancey
Pataphysique.C
5 years 10 months ago
Gertrude
Stein
lovedly
5 years 10 months ago
hardly a name
for a hardened male lol
Pataphysique.C
5 years 10 months ago
Yeah
BUT YOU'RE INEXTINGUISABLE TI MSE
lovedly
5 years 10 months ago
INEXTINGUISABLE TI MSE
i c
thanksee
Pataphysique.C
5 years 10 months ago
Hahah
lol
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