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Dream Girl She

A lovely dream came
to you
to me dreams
come to teach
most of my poems
are dreamy
they come to me
now to you I reach
read 'em please

you yourself are
a lover's dream
shhhhh, don't scream
love is like ice cream
enjoy let it not melt
wish later you will be
lovely girl you must be
keep dreaming of me

— lovedly, Jul 09, 2020

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Critiques

lovedly

lovedly

5 years 11 months ago

tnx 15

write a fab free* verse it would be so wonderful. * MEANING????

This is another fun write my friend