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Jun 11, 2026
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Divine longing
When night falls, the bird of my soul longs for home,
It seeks the harbour where it flies to Your dome.
I am an unanchored vessel and the echo in the chamber; who am I?
I am alone with the sweetness of remembering You, the warmth of Your presence makes me sigh!
— aqsa02331, Jun 11, 2026
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Jamie
3 days 21 hours ago
I like nature more than many…
I like nature more than many people. This is good writing. I can see what you draw with your words
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