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Divine longing

When night falls, the bird of my soul longs for home,

It seeks the harbour where it flies to Your dome.

I am an unanchored vessel and the echo in the chamber; who am I?

I am alone with the sweetness of remembering You, the warmth of Your presence makes me sigh!

 

 

— aqsa02331, Jun 11, 2026

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