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Dinner For Two

The same pot with its
blackened bottom.
The same grease stained stove.
In a kitchen
I said was too small.
You called it quaint.

Two plates at the table.
Two glasses of beer.
Your dog on the floor.
Beside my boots.

Stew and beer.
Hard men's food
you called it.

I ate slowly.
Your food went cold.

I made dinner for two.
Then ate with your dog.

— Whiskey and Ink (davidgambro31), Jul 09, 2026

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

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