Dimensional Dementia

Fractured psyches, Frankenstein
practicing professions
guinea pigs all in a row;

always on, slightly off
Wikipedestrian logic
dimensional dementia says it's so.
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Plastic personalities
put Achilles heels foot forward
recycled dreams float high above the roof;

erogenous enablers
emotionality outcries,
dimensional dementia has the proof.
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anti-skeptic scandalousity
shituation's bleak
if something threatens to back-up then, just let it;

traded wills for circumstance
you crazy diamonds all shine on,
dimensional dementia deserves to get the credit.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Happy Holidays?

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.