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Digging for Spring

If only
I can dig
For spring,

And find a way
To the coin of hope
For a few thousand
Tied souls to ring

But alas!
Death has the
Loudest voice
To sing across
My home land

— Rula, May 09, 2025

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Rula

Rula

1 year ago

Dearest Lavender

Thank you as always for reading and commenting.
It's awful what's happening there. Sorry if it's all what I'm expressing these days.
Thank you.