DESPER-ROTT-O

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When I read the line: "the demander and thief!"

all I could think of was: commander and chief!

always, Cat

I sure do think of those things; but most of all, I am reminded of the raw power that big money wields over our politics. I know we like to think that it isn't so, but truth denied isn't untrue." At least in the past, everyone was somewhat private, civil and there were certain protocols. Now, it's a bared lipped, teeth-gnashing, back-biting free for all! Every man, woman and child, look out for yourselves! They will trample their own, to get to the lifeboats. Good rant, ~ Geez.