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MH
Miserably Happy
Mar 14, 2020 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Dedicated to 45/3

Mirrors on the inside of my sunglass lenses
I thought, "Me, me, me!"
"Well no", said everyone else.

— Miserably Happy, Mar 14, 2020

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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Rough draft

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Country/Region: SC

Favorite Poets: What Was Once the Largest Shopping Center in Northern Ohio Was Built Where There Had Been a Pond I Used to Visit Every Summer Afternoon by Mary Oliver. , Chapter Subtitle in Hardcore Zen by Brad Warner Chapter Title: If Only... Subtitle: you may find that having is not so pleasing as wanting. This is not logical but it is often true., Rumi: Tending Two Shops

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Geezer

Geezer

6 years 4 months ago

Damn...

I wish there were more to this! Maybe you could call for a vote?
~ Geezer.
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