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Dec 23, 2022
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Dear Hanh
Your eyes
Rose above the hill
So many had failed to climb
What did you find?
(your answer here, please)
Oh, dragonfly.
Thomas
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Cultural differences need time and patience to harmonize.
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 years 10 months ago
dear Triskelion,
a surprise ending is always an eye-opener! I agree with the sentiment behind the poem, and I'm glad to have read it.
*hugs, Cat
Rula
2 years 10 months ago
Hello Thomas
I'm a fan of bravity, and this is an excellent example of succinctness.. I might not have gotten the full message yet I still appreciate the thought.
I too had to agree with your last words. I'm one of those who come from a very different culture to most of those fellow poets who post here, which makes me consider and reconsider what I post before I do, so that I won't be misunderstood.
Thank you for sharing.
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 10 months ago
Really interesting
You think it’s not a big commitment because it’s only a few lines until you read it. Then it’s a microcosmic universe
Tim
Geezer
2 years 10 months ago
Amen...
~ Geez.
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Triskelion
2 years 9 months ago
Ah, well
There was hope. I was really trying. Thanks for all your comments and keep thinking the future will be brighter and friendlier. Cheers all.
Thomas