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the dance of death

I have been watching

as the tendrils of life

drift off and away

casting shadows

on her soul

 

in a waning light

I felt the touch of faith

nails indented my knees

and palms, now laying down

I feel my heart shift

into a peaceful stillness

 

slowly it started

sliding in a sepia light

I now held her hand

tracing the infinity symbol

into her palm

 

now we silently wait

as death dances in the shadows

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Rula

Rula

12 years 4 months ago

Dear Jayne

This is touching though I don't figure every image yet I feel sadness through out. Is everything alright at your end. Is this about someone sick or dying and special for you?

Seren

Seren

12 years 4 months ago

Dear Rula

First off sorry for the delay in answering, We did have two deaths in our family and its part of the reason I havent been around much, I am still working on this one thanks for the read and your thoughts

sincerely Jayne- Chloe

Shyanne18

Shyanne18

12 years 4 months ago

LOVE IT

I think you may have written a new favorite of mine! Keep writing!

Seren

Seren

12 years 4 months ago

Smile

thank you so much I am very happy you enjoyed it, sorry for the delay answering your message

sincerely Jayne-Chloe