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raj
Apr 13, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Crossing Zebra Lines

Flora and fauna
beauty in diversity
don't discriminate-

— raj, Apr 13, 2018

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Critiques

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raj

8 years 1 month ago

Thanks Gee

for the read and comment
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Rula

Rula

8 years 1 month ago

V. much dnjoyed

there is beauty in the soun alliteration and consonant use, especially in the 'f' sound in "flora & fauna" also in 'ty' sound in beauty and diversity.
I thiught though the title might do better without the 'zebra' but that's only my opinion.
I have already enjoyed the read
Thank you for sharing dear raj.

R

raj

8 years 1 month ago

Hi Rula

thanks for the read and comment...honestly I am not familiar with the sound alteration and consonant use you mentioned...good to know that it happened to be so...

as for the title it was meant to convey that from human perspective we need to cross the black and white divide...

good to know you "v.much dnjoyed" it

warmly...

Rula

Rula

8 years 1 month ago

Hahaha

V. Much enjoyed :)