Clean? (A little rant)

Why don't you wash your weary thoughts,
and brush out your heavy woes and pains.
Wipe out those tears in eyes,
and sweep everyday's miseries away.
Bleach all the stained ,
and the spotted hatreds in your heart
clean it all and say:
Hey..
"Everything is gonna be OKAY."

— Rula, May 02, 2012

About This Poem

Last Few Words: An old write, thought I'd share it with you as a lightsome little piece...Hope you enjoy.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

Critiques

Ian.T

14 years 1 month ago

Rula

I will have another go at cleaning up lol. Loved the simplicity of this write for such a big job, Yours Ian.T

Rula

14 years 1 month ago

Thanks dear Ian ..I am happy

Thanks dear Ian ..I am happy you've dusted this piece and gave it
a tidy L00k...Appreciated:-)