Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
May 24, 2023
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
Challenge- Dear John Letter
Roll over my love
Look deeply into my eyes
Kiss me one last time
— Clentin, May 24, 2023
Share this poem
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Geezer
3 years ago
How novel...
an idea for a modern, English senryu! Nothing more to be said. Good stuff! ~ Geezer.
.
RoseBlack
3 years ago
Dear John
The simplest, most touching Dear John letter I have seen. Great job!
Clentin Martin
3 years ago
Thank you, I appreciate your
Thank you, I appreciate your reading my poems and you comments. Any help is great.