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KH
Kristen H.
Aug 08, 2024 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the challenge:

08/24 Broken Air Condition 🏆 Winner

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Broken Air Condition

We never had much more than each other
in the summer of 2016

Adventures on Saturday nights
Two wheels
Two helmets
Two hearts

Lazy Sunday mornings
Two cups of coffee
Two cigarettes burned
Two hands together

There wasn’t much to it
Just you and I,
and our broken air conditioner

— Kristen H., Aug 08, 2024

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: USA - Georgia, USA

Favorite Poets: Lord Alfred Tennyson, Robert Frost, Allen Ginsberg, Walt Whitman , Misha Collins, John Donne

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Critiques

John Leslie O'Kelley

John Leslie O'Kelley

1 year 10 months ago

Kristen

I enjoyed this it gave me hope that maybe there will also be a day like this for me.

KH

Kristen H.

1 year 10 months ago

Thank you

I wish this for everyone!

KH

Kristen H.

1 year 10 months ago

Thank you

very much, Rula!

KH

Kristen H.

1 year 9 months ago

Thank you

very much, Clentin! I appreciate it!