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Oct 09, 2025
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Breach of Faith
Our dogs love to sun themselves on our patio, out back.
I envy the bliss on their faces. The sun chasing away
any concerns they may have. We leave the door ajar
so they can return at their leisure.
Occasionally, the wind, or our absentmindedness
closes the door, creating a conspiracy of betrayal.
Tilted heads and quizzical looks through the windows confirm this.
As if to say, "Why would you do this?"
We respond with a treat in hopes of their forgiveness,
which is always accepted for our terrible transgression.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Candlewitch
5 months 3 weeks ago
hello Michael,
Dogs are such forgiving creatures and yours are blessed with you! You put me there with you and the "Kids", thanks for drawing me in.
very fondly, Cat
Michael Anthony
5 months 3 weeks ago
They are indeed, Cat. Thanks…
They are indeed, Cat. Thanks for the visit!