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Dec 04, 2021
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The bitter bug
The bitter
bug begged
to bite her
but the girl
was a little
fighter.
So in spite
she took to
light him.
Then the
bashful bug
fled in fright.
Fleeing into
the mists
of the ashy
autumn night .
— Edward nigma, Dec 04, 2021
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Triskelion
4 years 6 months ago
See....
Now that is a poem. It is whimsical, stylish and wholly entertaining. Thank you for making my morning start off in a positive way
Thomas
Edward nigma
4 years 6 months ago
thank you
and your welcome
Geezer
4 years 6 months ago
Nice little...
tongue twister! ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma
4 years 6 months ago
thank you
one my favorite types of poetry is tongue twisters because it fits with my alliteration.
and i was inspired by cole porters song the tale of the oyster
like i used the rhythm of it .
https://youtu.be/Acx_LN8X2_k