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Oct 02, 2024
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BEACH UNREADY
BEACH UNREADY
Why was I naked when I awoke
Could it be an odd sort of joke
A nudist beach with similar folk
But no, a deserted strip of sand
Memory loss I don’t understand
Before I move, just let me think
I do recall many a rum and coke
And someone there who spoke
I've a tiny towel worn as a cloak
Seeing the parts of me not tanned
Such a display was never planned
A lad’s day out and lots to drink
The cold tide laps, ready to soak
No pocket no wallet, I am broke
Such embarrasment it can evoke
This exposure sure to be banned
Yet hardly covered with my hand
And those I meet may well blink
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Jokerface82
12 months ago
Haha
Made me laugh good luck
Leslie
12 months ago
Twizzle48
I would llike to have been the one in your place! The topic was comical and I enjoyed it alot' I'll have to check out more of your stuff.
Geezer
12 months ago
Another odd...
and complicated rhyme scheme! Yeah, never woke to find myself naked and not know how, but I certainly have awakened in some strange places and circumstances, which were brought to mind. Excellent story. ~ Geez.
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