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Sep 10, 2011
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Ass
unmovable mule
push tug this donkey won't budge
kindly check its load
— IKnowNoBox, Sep 10, 2011
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Polished draft
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IKnowNoBox
14 years 10 months ago
Thank you both Rosi, and Loni
Not all who are stubborn are stubborn for no reason.
In ink,
Dabbler
scribbler
14 years 10 months ago
hello
At Last! a poem about me lol..........stan
Ian.T
13 years 9 months ago
David
A good Senyru as aposed to the Haiku, you should join Barbara's Workshop as we are doing an Eternal Renga which is a Haiku/Senyru of 5-7-5 then the next lines are two lines of 7 syllables each, the normal length for these is around 35 Stanzas but we is lazy, Take care great to have you on board,
Yours Ian.T
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