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May 05, 2017
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Anapest
With a book / you can cook
All this food / for each mood.
With that a/pron on tight,
Cook with all / of your might.
— Rhiannon1010, May 05, 2017
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wesley snow
9 years 2 months ago
I'd like to see the verse longer,
but you have found Anapest. That was spot on.
weirdelf
9 years ago
Correct Anapest, the real trick,
only learned through reading and practise, is to right longer using polysyllabic words, it is a gently, leading meter.
I'll do a reading if you write another one.
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