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Feb 14, 2023
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Amen
God!
Keep me a home
with walls that are prayers,
with windows that are pleas,
with doors that are supplications
to stay safe
in the face
Of such chaotic world
Turkey
— Rula, Feb 14, 2023
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: My heart goes to all those who lost their lives, homes and loved ones in Turkey and Syria
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Lavender
3 years 3 months ago
Amen
Dear Rula,
Thank you for this prayer, and amen...
xxx
L
Rula
3 years 2 months ago
Thank you
dearest Lavender!
Rula
3 years 2 months ago
Thank you
dearest Lavender!
Rosewood Apothecary
3 years 3 months ago
Mine as well
You’ve said something here everyone needs to hear from time to time. A deep plea of human compassion.
Tim
Rula
3 years 2 months ago
Totally agree
Tim.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Clentin Martin
3 years 2 months ago
Human compassion seems to be
Human compassion seems to be out of fashion i this modern world.
Loved your poem
Rula
3 years 2 months ago
Thank you
Sir! Hope more would be able to reach those in trouble at least with a prayer.
Thank you for reading!