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May 16, 2021
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alone
Represent it cause you’re in it,
don’t you love the way life lies?
Deep in the despair, rise in originality,
there dwells loneliness, it's embellished.
— knowledgevariable_, May 16, 2021
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Last Few Words: dont have any
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Geezer
5 years ago
There are so many...
ways that this can be taken. The only thing that I would change is the word [rise] I would use [risen]. ~ Geez.
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