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Oct 13, 2022
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Of Alex Jones
If
every
one
of
their
anguished
mothers
spoke
all
day
long,
there
would
still
not
be
enough
words
to
pierce
your
hard
cold
heart.
***
— Lavender, Oct 13, 2022
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Critiques
Rosewood Apothecary
3 years 9 months ago
He was trash before
More like hazardous waste. The harm this guy has caused is unacceptable. The worst kind of poplar tripe imaginable.
Roast him, f**k that guy,
Tim
Michael Anthony
3 years 9 months ago
Hard to find enough words to
Hard to find enough words to accurately express our feelings about this horrible human (?) being. This was a very good start - thank you!
Best
Lavender
3 years 9 months ago
His words
have caused immeasurable pain and suffering, yet he remains callous.
Thank you for reading.
L
lovedly
3 years 9 months ago
Lav....... His words
every human has a different notion
just either bear them
bare em
better
IGNORE
Lavender
3 years 9 months ago
Hello, Lovedly,
Thank you for reading.
L
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