Alewife (Haiku)

The stream, full of words
Stanzas, swimming poetry
Like schools of alewife

— Rosewood Apothecary, Nov 12, 2022

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S.A., USA

Favorite Poets: Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Walt Whitman. I’m enamored by the work of lyricists such as Robert Hunter, John Barlow, John Dyer Baizley, and Tom Marshall just to name a handful.

Critiques

Lavender

3 years 6 months ago

Alewife

Hi, Tim,
You can't see, but I am giving you a standing ovation. This is fantastic.
L

Rosewood Apothecary

3 years 6 months ago

You can’t see it

…but I’m bashful. You’re compliments mean a great deal to me. Thank you.

Tim

Geezer

3 years 6 months ago

I add my...

appreciation for a great Haiku! ~ Geez.
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Jackweb

3 years 6 months ago

Wow!

I can see a high level of creativity here. I doff my cap for you. Erudite ink!
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