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age with time Lady Grace

of aging

the principle cause
of aging

is the very fear
of aging

that’s a
natural phenomenon

so relax
you will
surely age
don’t have a rage,
but do age
gracefully
not hastily

but gracefully
you must leave the stage
without any rage,
for those who are
younger in age.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

BlueDemon77

12 years 2 months ago

Thanks loved

Strong poem but not in the line of the workshop. We had several options to choose from as a challenge. Forgive me if I'm wrong but this doesn't represent any of the forms, ideas, or topics addressed in the workshop.

Ron

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12 years 2 months ago

I have not joined any workshop this is just another one of

my trash ones

Ian.T

12 years 2 months ago

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I know I is old, and fear not, so why is I becoming older ???LOL
I think that a little adjustment to the words on this one.
The poem "Desiderata" is a fine piece of writing, are you familiar with it,
I don't mean touchy feely but the words LOL
A good write there it seems to be an abridged version of that.
Take care young Bard, not sure what Ron was talking about,
Yours Ian.T

loved

12 years 2 months ago

i don't read much poetry but

as you know
compose off the cuff
I however take ur words
as a compliment
or should i??

this poem on aging
i composed in 2010
on another site
which now I'm clearing

Ian.T

12 years 2 months ago

Loved

Three years and it hasn't aged one minute,
that's time Sojourn's for you..
Have a great day young Bard,
Yours Ian

loved

12 years 2 months ago

you meant sojourn for me ... didn't you

and
you now say
I'm hard as stone
a rock jutted into the soaring sea
rather,
snoring sea...
that's me

mand

12 years 2 months ago

Definatley going to take your

Definatley going to take your advise from now on! Less rage - less old age. Sounds like a win, win situation.

Your poems are always intriquing - and I always learn a little something each time I visit.

Keep safe

Love Mand xxxxxx

loved

12 years 2 months ago

thanks Mand...U R

definitely
welcome to take my
advice
and thanks for saying so ;publicly..