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After the Storm
After The Storm
The path, a serpentine and muddy swell,
was hemmed with puddles where the heavens fell.
All things, in colorless and tangled skirts,
hid pools of light where silent wonder
had once embroidered every vibrant hue.
Within the mud, the ancient footprints grew
like hollow smiles that yearned for tears to lie,
as twilight blurred the canvas of the sky.
Liberty, once warm, was now a colder thing—
a storm that stilled the birds and dulled their wing.
The world, a fractured prism, soft and pale,
displayed each angle of its bitter tale,
a straight-edged shriek that echoed to the bone,
too loud to hear, too lonely to be known.
A frozen mind, in such a placeless place,
could see no past, no future, nor a face.
The eyes of youth, the old man's knowing gaze,
were lost within this unremembered maze.
A final bomb, suspended in the air,
was held by something, maybe God, in prayer.
The only choice, a final, pure design:
the genesis of a world, and a new mind.
The mind now ventures where the night winds blow,
with hope's bright characters, a guiding glow.
Rough roads become a path of polished stone;
the angels sing their song for color, known
as memories for futures yet to be,
a new creation, now at last set free.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Lavender
7 months ago
After The Storm
Hello, Mark,
So good. Spoke to me in several ways - individually and universally. It has both a melancholy feel, and an acceptance of a new beginning - but only through an ending. Like the title very much.
Thank you!
L
Geezer
6 months 4 weeks ago
The beginning...
of the ending of the beginning... "A darkened circle of humanity, left on its own will naturally go native."
I do believe that Albert Sweitzer the "lost doctor" said that once. At any rate, I think these "lost tribes" that want to stay lost so badly that they kill anyone who dares to make contact, have the right idea. It seems like the more we have the more we want, and we are willing to wreck the environment to have it.
A positive ending, if it only might come true.
~ Geez