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An Aerosmith Rendezvous
She said, “I’m BACK IN THE SADDLE, don’t play coy,
Let’s skip all the chatter and bring out the toys.”
With a wink and a whip, she was ready to play,
I knew right then... I had to WALK THIS WAY.
She whispered, “PANDORA’S BOX is dusty on the shelf,
you’ll need both hands... and a dab of stealth.”
I tried hard to resist, but then lost all control,
when her ruby lips moaned, “There’s a HOLE IN MY SOUL.”
We made LOVE IN AN ELEVATOR... man what a blast,
hit the top floor strummin'... then ran out of gas.
Still tangled in lace, taken to THE OTHER SIDE,
she purred, “Now you’re mine" as she straddled to ride.
We played until dawn with TOYS IN THE ATTIC,
The ropes she bound tight, her rhythm erratic.
I DON’T WANT TO MISS A THING, I confessed,
she played out her sins... had me fully obsessed.
She left with the sun, SWEET EMOTION left behind,
I'll DREAM ON she whispered, “You're one of a kind.”
Now I wait by the door with a glint in my eye,
when she returns... we’ll set fire to the sky.
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Arkansas
1 week 2 days ago
No great fan of Aerosmith, but I appreciate your use of their
song titles to create this piece. Pukka job!
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