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May 01, 2014
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'hark my heart stops
stress stalks me
I sweat helplessly....
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
11 years 11 months ago
Loved
Though my heart doth beat strongly
Your words fell short as title displayed
If thou doth require correction
Pray take to you my words:-
Hark my heart doth stop
stress stalks me on silent wings
I sweat helplessly.
Love to our one Loved
That he should toil unaided
When our help is nigh,
Yours Ian.T
loved
11 years 11 months ago
great vision
tis best to traverse
on known sands
than walk across drier grass ...
I shall limit to my hall of fame
lest I earn greater ...defame
emeka ozurumba
11 years 11 months ago
lovely mingling
lovely mingling
loved
11 years 11 months ago
thanks
we mingle to gingle
Rula
11 years 11 months ago
Loved this from both of you
Loved this from both of you dear friends.
weirdelf
11 years 11 months ago
I can relate to that.
I can relate to that.
loved
11 years 11 months ago
that you can
makes me smile
Sir Jess