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Weirdrandomgirl

Member since March 31, 2018

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I Remember

Posted Apr 1, 2018 · 22 lines · 13 critiques

I remember

I woke up this morning looking for you,
And all I found was a picture of you,

It's been months since you've been gone
But every morning I still think of you

I remember the way you smiled at me and said those words that broke me

I remember the way you liked your coffee in the morning
and a kiss before you left for the office

I remember how you would call and check on me
even when you never had the time

I remember how you told me I was beautiful and
I remember those passionate lips

But most of all I remember how you walked away
from me that day like nothing ever happened

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I remember how it felt when you said goodbye
I remember how I died a little bit more inside

From the beautiful dream to a hasty nightmare
To the pretty lies and stupid faces

But the thing that killed me the most was to wake up a find that
it wasn't a dream

And I only have one thing left on my mind
Will he ever come back to me?

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Received a critique
on I Remember from @weirdelf
"You surely can write. But I think this poem needs more anger. More you being ok with you. ##%%&& him, he wasn't good enough or honest enough for you."
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Received a critique
on Beautiful Strangers from @weirdelf
"The rest I felt lapsed into sadness and loss, disempowering yourself. You know words. You can write. I know you can do better."
04 Wed

Received a critique
on I Remember from @raj
"Good to know you liked the suggested change...I would still give credit to your poem for me to be able to do that because your poem has substance ...i hope you didn't find that the essence of your poem is lost in the su…"
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"The day you left i became a writer"
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I'm a young 12 year old girl trying to figure out my feelings and emotions through poetry

Location: North Carolina, USA

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