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Weirdrandomgirl
Member since March 31, 2018
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I Remember
I remember
I woke up this morning looking for you,
And all I found was a picture of you,
It's been months since you've been gone
But every morning I still think of you
I remember the way you smiled at me and said those words that broke me
I remember the way you liked your coffee in the morning
and a kiss before you left for the office
I remember how you would call and check on me
even when you never had the time
I remember how you told me I was beautiful and
I remember those passionate lips
But most of all I remember how you walked away
from me that day like nothing ever happened
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I remember how it felt when you said goodbye
I remember how I died a little bit more inside
From the beautiful dream to a hasty nightmare
To the pretty lies and stupid faces
But the thing that killed me the most was to wake up a find that
it wasn't a dream
And I only have one thing left on my mind
Will he ever come back to me?
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- April 2018
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16 MonReceived a critique
on I Remember from @weirdelf
"You surely can write. But I think this poem needs more anger. More you being ok with you. ##%%&& him, he wasn't good enough or honest enough for you." -
16 MonReceived a critique
on Beautiful Strangers from @weirdelf
"The rest I felt lapsed into sadness and loss, disempowering yourself. You know words. You can write. I know you can do better." -
04 WedReceived a critique
on I Remember from @raj
"Good to know you liked the suggested change...I would still give credit to your poem for me to be able to do that because your poem has substance ...i hope you didn't find that the essence of your poem is lost in the su…" -
04 WedReceived a critique
on I Remember from @Sparrow
"I have put on Stream two Blogs that are an A-Z of poetry and there you will find many styles and forms of poetry. There are so many but just browse and find the ones you will be comfortable with, then just start out and…" -
03 TueReceived a critique
on I Remember from @raj
"i am sharing below an alternate version of your poem...i have ventured to do this taking care not to disturb its essence... Engulfed in Vivid Memories I wake up each morning looking for you like sunlight sprawling on my…" -
03 TueReceived a critique
on I Remember from @raj
"Good to read your comment especially to know about your maintaining a good balance between your academics and poetry. Also good to know that you are open to suggestions. Give me some time for coming up with an alternati…" -
02 MonReceived a critique
on I Remember from @raj
"It is your poem which is obviously dear to you. However, if you want to have a suggestion, I could come up with a version without changing its essence. ....................................." -
02 MonReceived a critique
on I Remember from @raj
"I liked what you have honestly stated above as to what inspires you to write.. Considering your preteen age, I wish to make a couple of suggestions:- 1. While it is good to use poetry as a means of expressing what you f…" -
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- March 2018
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31 SatFirst publication
Beautiful Strangers
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31 SatJoined Neopoet
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About Me
About me
I'm a young 12 year old girl trying to figure out my feelings and emotions through poetry
Location: North Carolina, USA
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