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Warrior Princess
Member since June 27, 2022
Member for 3 years, 11 months
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Two Hearts Meet
Words were breathed over the unhatched egg
The destined rider was chosen
To bear the heart of a dragon
Their jewel-like hearts of hearts
Fearlessness, tenacity and valour
The rider exuberates!
She rode along the Dragon’s back
And share the heart of the dragon
She carried the hearts of fire
And held on to the breathing earth
She became invincible
With bold courage and a brave heart
She fought her battles adventurously!
The blue dragon flapped its wings
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And took her high oft into the sky
She became him and he became her
Their souls entwined as one
They flew among the clouds and hid in the water
They both loved each other
As they journeyed together
The dragon looked to her for guidance
To be kept safe among the earth
With shiny clear scales and large golden eyes
The dragon breathe fire as he matured across the land
He spoke the words to the female rider
Ride on ride on victory is ours!
Warrior Princess’s timeline
- June 2023
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27 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2023
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17 TueReceived a critique
on Respect for Women from @Candlewitch
"I feel that your poetry is very important and educational. some men dominate and abuse just because they can get away with it. I call them cowards! keep writing! * hugs, Cat p.s. I had a mother who was very abusive...sh…" -
17 TueNew follower
@Ekaterina Alexandrovna Sherbatskaya
- October 2022
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24 MonNew follower
@Geezer
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12 WedCritiqued
"Come High Water (collaborative workshop #8)" by @Workshops
"Thank You Rosewood Apothecary, it was a pleasure and insightful working with everyone. I learned as well." - September 2022
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- August 2022
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30 TueReceived a critique
on The Perpetrator from @Triskelion
"Should be written as "bound". "Intergenerational" would be proper as "intergenerationality" but is quite a big word. I would try to rephrase the line. Your poem reflects a certain wisdom that in some situations can be d…" -
30 TueReceived a critique
on The Perpetrator from @Geezer
"Hearken is an intriguing one, I don't see it fitting here; and you used the past tense in a number of places. If you go back to using [listen] you will see what I mean. I would use it like this: "Listen to my voice". Si…" -
30 TueReceived a critique
on The Perpetrator from @Depressed 1
"A tough subject written about very nicely." -
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29 MonReceived a critique
on The Hand of God from @Geezer
"the transition of the third stanza to the fourth can better be clarified by using the words [had to stay] rather than dwell. Of course, just an opinion, but I think the reader might be more easily brought to the conclus…" -
29 MonReceived a critique
on The Hand of God from @Geezer
"for bringing that perspective into view! I hadn't thought of it that way! Yes, I can see that! I'm not sure of how to make it any clearer any sooner though. Geez. ." -
28 SunReceived a critique
on The Hand of God from @Lavender
"Hello, Warrior Princess, Pretty intense language and emotion. I can feel the struggle, and even more so, the victory - "Yet I crawl, I stand, I walk!" Chilling! I sense that the voice of the third stanza belongs to the…" -
28 SunReceived a critique
on The Hand of God from @Geezer
"with the I identity, for the rest of the poem. You also need to fix the tense in the line: "My soul looked up and long[ed] for the garden. Other than that, good work. ~ Geezer. ." -
28 SunCritiqued
"My days at work" by @Thomas W Meyer
"Hi Thomas, a well-expressed poem. I sensed the frustration and burnout at your job. The title of the poem could be changed to jump out at the reader. Overall well written for someone who just started. Keep at it and tak…" -
28 SunCritiqued
"God does not live in Heaven " by @Samuel Onyeche
"Samuel, a profound piece of writing. Those were my favourite lines: God lives in every piece of love Broken to put smile on a crying face God lives in every syllable of words Spoken to heal a broken heart." -
28 SunCritiqued
"I Choose to be a Spider" by @Samuel Onyeche
"Hi Samuel Oyeche, a profound piece and I love the analogy of the spider and why you choose to be this animal. Those were my favourite lines. And feeds on the skin of motherless children those little children wearing sor…" -
28 SunCritiqued
"your time blows in the wind" by @Ifeanyichukwu Onwughalu
"Very profound piece. Just some suggestions, beginning with all your stanzas capitalize the first letter. Capitalize each word in the title. Where you end with a full stop capitalize the next letter. Overall a heroic pie…" -
28 SunCritiqued
"She Walked Along The Lake" by @Depressed 1
"Hi Depressed, this poem is profound. My perspective is the person had given up on herself, on any hope of seeking any help from this world. Her only option of freedom was to commit suicide in the lake. It is raw and dee…" -
28 SunCritiqued
"She Walked Along The Lake" by @Depressed 1
"Hi Depressed, this poem is profound. My perspective is the person had given up on herself, on any hope of seeking any help from this world. Her only option of freedom was to commit suicide in the lake. It is raw and dee…" -
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- July 2022
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18 MonCritiqued
"RoseBlack" by @RoseBlack
"RoseBlack this poem was beautifully penned. It held my interest. Excellent job." -
15 FriNew follower
@RoseBlack
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15 FriHighest posting month
July 2022 — 13 poems
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- June 2022
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28 TueFirst critique offered
on "My Father... Random Challenge # 16" by @Geezer
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27 MonFirst publication
Freedom
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27 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am from Trinidad and Tobago in the Caribbean. I am inspired by writing poetry as it helps during my healing journey. I would like to improve my poetry skills by learning various styles of writing so that my poems can also be light to connect to a person's darkness. My favourite poet is Laud Maud Montgomery. I am also in the process of publishing my first healing poetry book this year.
Location: South Zone
Favorite Poets
Maya Angelou
Beau Taplin
Nelson Mandela
William Shakespeare
Lucy Maud Montgomery
Recent Work
Two Hearts Meet
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Utophia
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The Perpetrator
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The Hand of God
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Expressions
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What is
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Am I a Cinderalla
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Wounded
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Free Spirited
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The Loud Silence
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Workshops
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| Neopoet Collaborative Workshop Poem #8 | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-10-02 | Concluded |
| Neopoet Collaborative Workshop Poem # 7 | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-09-22 | Concluded |
| Neopoet Collaborative Workshop Poem # 6 | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-09-13 | Concluded |
| Neopoet Collaborative Poem #5 | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-09-06 | Concluded |
| Neopoet Collaborative Poem #4 Workshop | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2022-08-28 | Concluded |