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Thomas W Meyer
Member since August 27, 2022
Member for 3 years, 9 months
My days at work
Everyday when I'm at work,
I try to relax, and not go bazerk.
I always am careful at what I say,
I try not to make my customers,
Grab their stuff and run away.
I have loved my job,
This I have to admit.
But I can't take it no more,
Not just one little bit!
The store that I work at,
On weekdays we stay open till 10,
I wish we could close early,
Like we did last year, again!
We don't have a lot of employees,
Not even a lot of cashiers.
They schedule one in the morning,
And one at night, that's just putting us in tears!
Thomas W Meyer’s timeline
- August 2023
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27 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2022
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28 SunReceived a critique
on My days at work from @Warrior Princess
"Hi Thomas, a well-expressed poem. I sensed the frustration and burnout at your job. The title of the poem could be changed to jump out at the reader. Overall well written for someone who just started. Keep at it and tak…" -
28 SunReceived a critique
on My days at work from @Lord Barham
"You could meter this; however, it already has a tonality that is quite metrical without formal metering. Mostly I like this and can totally get where you're coming from. I'm guessing you might be feeling a bit of pandem…" -
27 SatReceived a critique
on My days at work from @Triskelion
"Great name, by the way. Your subject matter is relevant. Your title is a little bland, but effective. I like the rhymes work and berserk. I had totally forgotten that word. Your spelling of it throws a little rascally s…" -
27 SatFirst publication
My days at work
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27 Sat
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27 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Hi there, my name is Thomas Meyer, and I am here to share a lot of my poetry. I'm being told everyday at my work, that people love it when I rhyme. They say I don't even go bazerk! They even tell me, that I should write a book. That made me feel so good, so I got online, to find somewhere to look.. I tried this one poetry site, but then I got banned. I don't think that was right! The other reason why I'm here, is because I've worked to much for almost each and every store. I'd rather work from home, I can't take those places anymore! Well that is all that I have to say. You take care now, Have a nice day!
Location: MI
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