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Walt77
Member since March 9, 2021
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Nature’s Fashion Model
Silky wings,
Flutter in the breeze,
Landing,
On every,
Flowers and trees.
As a,
Hummingbird on the wing,
Taking,
Nature's sweet candy,
In spring.
Coloured wings,
Fly in the wind,
Like angelic angels,
That came,
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To sing.
Wings shimmers,
In the light,
Causing wonder,
And delight,
Nature’s butterflies in flight.
In spring,
Summer and fall,
Nature’s fashion models,
Down the runway,
Comes to call.
As winters,
Breath whispers gently,
The model sleeps,
Awaking in spring,
Butterflies’ puro lets gracefully
Walt77’s timeline
- March 2026
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09 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2022
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09 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2021
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05 ThuReceived a critique
on Nature’s Fashion Model from @Geezer
"The main reason that I wanted to comment, yet I forgot! The word 'angelic' ! ~ Geez. ." -
05 ThuReceived a critique
on Nature’s Fashion Model from @Triskelion
"can you find another word for either angelic or angels in S3L3? The phrase "angelic angels" repeats one word against the other. I think your poem is worth a little more work. Thomas" -
05 ThuReceived a critique
on Nature’s Fashion Model from @Geezer
"of Butterflies and birds being angels. Only a couple of criticisms here. You use a lot of plurals where they are not needed. 1] Flower[s] and tree[s]. 2] Shimmer[s] 3] come[s] to call 4] Winter, being personalized, shou…" -
04 Wed
- June 2021
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15 TueReceived a critique
on Ancient Rock from @Geezer
"1] It makes me feel like I'm standing at some ancient people's site. I think that maybe you should use another word, like [ritual] in the line: "[Sacred] fire crackles" 2] How about saying: Ritual fire crackles So softl…" -
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- May 2021
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31 Mon
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30 SunReceived a critique
on Thunderbirds Roar from @lovedly
"Doing maneuvers, Mark and you wow wish I COULD" -
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15 SatReceived a critique
on Elder's Fire from @Geezer
"In the fifth stanza, you should use [rise] instead of rose. The sixth stanza I would say: "In peaceful slumber Elders spoke Giving wisdom Through the smoke Watch how you give your tenses, it says much about your writing…" -
15 Sat
- April 2021
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25 SunReceived a critique
on Morning Concerto from @c lynn brooks
"I was able to picture it all through your words. There is a peaceful,tranquility present in this poem. Keep up the writing" -
21 WedReceived a critique
on Morning Concerto from @Ray Whitaker
"Good stanzas two 6 lines, 2 five lines, one last a four liner. Great use of white space, IMHO." -
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- March 2021
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27 Sat
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09 TueFirst publication
Lass of Autumn
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09 Tue
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09 TueJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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I love to write poetry
Location: Ontario, Canada, CAN
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