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May 30, 2021
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Thunderbirds Roar
Roaring,
Of thunder,
Could be heard,
Men and women in blue,
Flew,
The red, white, and blue.
From,
Base in Nevada,
They came,
Ariel feats of,
Daring,
Glistening in sun rays.
Ah's,
Could be heard,
Seeing the Thunderbirds,
Fly,
Doing maneuvers,
Parting the sky.
Men,
And women,
Of the sky,
Displaying proudly,
Old glory,
As they fly.
With,
Great precision,
They do fly,
In final salute,
Missing man,
Formation,
In the sky.
Aces,
Of the air,
Proudly fly,
Like your mythical,
Namesake,
In the sky.
— Walt77, May 30, 2021
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Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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lovedly
5 years ago
two Airforce guys
Doing maneuvers,
Mark and you
wow
wish I COULD