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Vivovon
Member since July 15, 2016
Member for 9 years, 10 months
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Vivovon’s timeline
- July 2021
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15 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- July 2017
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15 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2016
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25 SunCritiqued
"Western medicine:" by @OriginalRhyku
"I am glad that you all agree this is a democratic forum. I am glad that you stand by your own view. I am equally glad that I have put up view strong and firm. That is long enough. So Long." -
24 SatCritiqued
"Western medicine:" by @OriginalRhyku
"The title of the poem is not a western professor or a western doctor. It is "western medicine." In my first comment, I said I do not like the title. If the title is ' A Western Professor' or 'A Western Doctor' the persp…" -
24 SatCritiqued
"Western medicine:" by @OriginalRhyku
"It is misinformation that the doctors earn a large sum of money. Here, is the info from the internet. Average Salary for People with Jobs as Physicians / Doctors $207,948 Job National Salary Data Family Physician / Doct…" -
24 SatCritiqued
"Western medicine:" by @OriginalRhyku
"Poets and poems are not above the law or the norms." -
24 SatCritiqued
"Western medicine:" by @OriginalRhyku
"When you get sick make sure that you do not go to a doctor with a medical degree, MBBS, MD, FRCP, FRCS, and etc from a modern university. All these degrees are western. You now said of the big business. I suggest that y…" -
24 SatCritiqued
"Western medicine:" by @OriginalRhyku
"My dear Esker You may blame and question a doctor or the doctors, a hospital or the hospitals, but you cannot put the blame on the "western medicine." It may be a well-written poem. However, its theme and context are fl…" -
23 FriCritiqued
"Western medicine:" by @OriginalRhyku
"You have every right to express in the way you feel good and entertain your views in the way you feel right. I join neopoet.com to learn and enjoy poetry, but not to indulge in any form of argument or debate. I just now…" -
23 FriCritiqued
"Western medicine:" by @OriginalRhyku
"You have every right to make your own decision and to cherish your own view." -
22 ThuReceived a critique
on The ascetic and I from @lovedly
"in all walks of life i try and help ailing human beings who try and show down others not knowing me" -
22 ThuReceived a critique
on The ascetic and I from @lovedly
"beautiful poetry, beautiful poetry how I wish I could have composed it,composed it, you are bold to lend an independent trend,an independent trend" -
21 WedReceived a critique
on I wish I were from @valene
"Your wishes are real and you never know when one or more may come true! It's good to wish, to dream and/or to hope for whatever you believe can and possibly will make your life more worthwhile! I wish on the 1st star I…" -
21 WedReceived a critique
on I wish I were from @Esker
"science has its own brand of humor those thinkers as we are creative thinkers with our humor everyone delving... happy that we are learning new things Thank U!" -
20 TueReceived a critique
on I wish I were from @Sparrow
"Not so much lost young writer but more of that realisation of being able to exist in many places at the same time. We are here to learn of all things that a physical being can learn in being subject to. Our realisation…" -
19 MonReceived a critique
on I wish I were from @Esker
"Shroedingers Kat! put the bling where it need be my notion of this is that there is a door on that unknown we push the qauntum computer and structure crushing intricate to grandiose in matter and the theorem of the Anti…" -
19 MonReceived a critique
on I wish I were from @valene
"While reading your poem, it made me smile! In a way I felt as though you were speaking of me! There are days I feel as though I have a fairly good idea of who I am and where I want my life to be headed and then there ar…" -
19 MonReceived a critique
on Madness in the rain from @Esker
"draws alive everything with the countour and texture of cloud inverted...everything shines...takes on a deeper hue the ugly become beautiful one can skirt issues and don identities mingle mix and vanish in its mists the…" - August 2016
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07 SunNew follower
@lovedly
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04 ThuFirst critique offered
on "Heart Disease" by @Shyanne18
- July 2016
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15 FriFirst publication
Vivovon Species5750981 (since unpublished)
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15 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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