OriginalRhyku

Member since August 26, 2016

Member for 9 years, 9 months

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174 Poems

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Posted Aug 26, 2018 · 8 lines · 4 critiques

Prudent do not need retractions
Focused shun all irrelevance
Wise review and revise actions
Pragmatic strive for a balance

Bold do right heedless of pressure
Good have a moral foundation
Humble not obsessed by power
True walk the talk with clear vision

OriginalRhyku’s timeline

August 2021
26 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
July 2019
14 Sun

Received a critique
on Fleeting Summit: from @Sparrow 42
"As Japanese writing goes this was really an adding exercise, I think that seeing you have the syllables count right there are better things to lay before our eyes. But as a template excellent, Yours Ian"
March 2019
15 Fri

Received a critique
on Pot melting? from @Cloudthings
"Not sure if any critique is needed here - so simply, it says what it needs to!"
15 Fri

Received a critique
on Seasonings: from @Cloudthings
"I am not an educated critic regarding poetry (other stuff, yes), especially rhyku. But I enjoyed this & it seems to be as perfect as it can be. Now you have made me keen to go & research rhyku (I understand the signific…"
August 2018
26 Sun

Posted a poem
Leaders:
"Prudent do not need retractions"
Open thread 8 lines
23 Thu

Posted a poem
Tertiary tints:
"An uncommon woman and a common man"
Open thread 20 lines
22 Wed

Posted a poem
Parsing Personalized Patriotism:
"What is true measure of a Patriot?"
Open thread 8 lines
February 2018
09 Fri

Posting milestone
100 poems posted
August 2017
26 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
September 2016
23 Fri

Most-discussed work
Western medicine:

24 critiques to date.
15 Thu

Highest posting month
September 2016 — 25 poems
05 Mon

First critique offered
on "Nature's nature" (since unpublished) by @Vivovon
August 2016
26 Fri

First publication
High Cue
26 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

Originally coined the term Rhyku (Haiku in Rhyme form preceded by a Title). Gratified by an increasing number of persons utilizing Rhyku to express their views.

Location: Asia India

Favorite Poets

Rabindranath Tagore

Shakespeare among many more