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vinnie16
Member since January 20, 2013
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REFUGE
MY WORLD
SO MUCH TURMOIL.
COME HEAR ME .
FOR YOUR EYES PUT ME AT PEACE.
YOU TOUCH ME WITH SOFT WINDS
AND ENTER MY HEART WITH LOVE .
COME LET ME HOLD YOU.
PROTECT YOU.
WHILE IM AT EASE.
BE MNE FOR ETERNITY.
IN MY WORLD THERE IS NOTHING WITH OUT YOU.
LET ME BE YOUR OMEGA.
THE ONE YOU REST YOUR HEAD ON.
FOR I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOU WEARY OR BROKEN.
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MY FIRE FEEDS OFF YOUR AIR.
LEAVE ME WITH YOUR HANDS.
I CAN ONLY GIVE YOU MY HEART.
BUILD AN EMPIRE FOR MY QUEEN, MY LOVE.
I FADE AT NIGHT IN THE EYES, BUT NEVER LAY DOWN IN DEFEAT.
I WONT REST UNTIL YOU’RE IN MY ARMS.
UNTIL IM HOME
UNTIL I PLACE MY LIPS ON THE ONE I LOVE.
(I WROTE THIS FOR MY WIFE JENNIFER WHILE SERVING IN OIF)
BY
VINCENT MUSCATO
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- February 2013
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27 WedReceived a critique
on Resurect Me from @weirdelf
"How did Stan figure out you were military? I didn't pick it, except for the belief in self and the loyalty to your fellow man. Like Ian said, watch the spelling. I raze my hands," -
25 MonReceived a critique
on Resurect Me from @themoonman
"Your poem has 23 lines, out of those there are 16 of the personal pronoun " I " and 8 of the personal pronoun " my " ... a lot of those could be taken out and the poem would be improved, especially if you include the re…" -
25 MonReceived a critique
on Resurect Me from @Ian.T
"Firstly welcome to Neopoet and I hope that you will enjoy being here. I loved this piece it down to earth also from the heart. Just take care when using comps, that the spell checker will only pick up a word that is mis…" -
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25 MonCritiqued
"DREAMS OF HEAVEN" by @scribbler
"yeah I do the same like for my last poe, resurrect me is about the past." -
25 MonCritiqued
"Prisoner" by @PadraicTheTerrible
"beautifully written I could never say I understand but stay STRONG" -
24 SunReceived a critique
on Resurect Me from @scribbler
"We must all accept that things happen which are beyond our control. All we can hope for is that the good and bad might balance out. I'm not much of a free verse judge but this has plenty of imagery and feeling so It mus…" -
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- January 2013
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21 MonReceived a critique
on Spiraling from @Jenifer James
"Welcome too - loved this, fresh and original, very strong. missed the 'caps' bit but love it as i have found it." -
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20 SunFirst critique offered
on "Flanders" by @Ian.T
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20 SunFirst publication
Spiraling
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20 SunJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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