Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Valentin Hușman
Member since February 26, 2026
Member for 3 months, 9 days
Sand storm
We are at the top of the food chain.
The superiority of our species remains our favorite concept.
We are content,
Our homeostasis is fully satisfied.
All that’s left for us to do is watch,
From the top of the sand mountain,
With our eyes closed and our reflexes gone.
Moon Kissed,
Happy that I’m still here,
In the darkness,
Not on shifting sands,
At the top of the world.
It could be the end of the world,
And we wouldn’t even feel it.
Read the rest of the poem Show less
We’re blind in the darkness,
But we like it that way.
What I don’t know doesn’t affect me.
Only me and the sandstorm know this,
Don’t tell anyone.
Information is power,
And we are weak.
Valentin Hușman’s timeline
- April 2026
-
04 SatNew follower
@Clentin
-
01 WedReceived a critique
on Sand storm from @Lavender
"Hello, Valentin, Nice take on the image - I agree with Geezer. I am getting an "ignorance is bliss" feel from this. Strong language. Thank you, L" -
01 WedReceived a critique
on Sand storm from @Geezer
"I'm guessing that you are remarking upon how little we truly know about our world, and our egotistical view of it all. I was a bit confused at the admonishment to be quiet and not tell everyone. I'm thinking that the li…" -
01 Wed
- March 2026
-
16 MonReceived a critique
on Burning Bridges from @Lavender
"Hello, Valentin, So relatable. Wonderful first and second lines, especially the word "porcelain." The imagery throughout the poem is vivid and clear - staring at the ceiling for hours on end, stole all my lighters, fenc…" -
14 Sat
-
14 Sat
-
13 Fri
-
06 FriReceived a critique
on Burning Bridges from @BlueBerry
"The setup of the poem is entirely postmodernist. I like it. You are moving in the same direction as with the other poems here. The structure is there, along with the rhythm you have established through the verses. You a…" -
05 ThuReceived a critique
on Burning Bridges from @Geezer
"they fall apart and never get rebuilt. I still build from those basic friendships and the kind of people that I lived with... The ones that I married, the ones that were connected to them and me and my kids... Those thi…" -
03 Tue
-
03 TueReceived a critique
on The Artificial Human from @Geezer
"politician does that on the fly. Doesn't matter what side he is on, if he/she/it is any good at their job, they take all of the things they know about you into consideration to predict which way you will vote. I do like…" -
02 MonCritiqued
"Illusion No.1" by @BlueBerry
"I genuinely find this text interesting. It really makes me visualise the inertia of just existing. I love the images that you created. My only advice would be to also try some auditive images, it would give the images a…" -
02 MonFirst critique offered
on "Illusion No.1" by @BlueBerry
-
02 Mon
- February 2026
-
28 SatNew follower
@ritam
-
27 Fri
-
26 ThuFirst publication
Spinning disco ball
-
26 Thu
-
26 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Hi there! I'm a 19 years old non binary spoken word performer from Romania.
I particularly enjoy writing retrospective texts about different topics (family, politics, religion and so on).
Location: ROU
Recent Work
Sand storm
Contest Wins
This member has not yet won any contests.