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Your Visionary

Posted Jun 13, 2026 · 52 lines · 3 critiques

The way I look at you

Like there’s stars in my eyes

Knowing you’re just cover

And once again I’m tangled in your little white lies

But the blame is on me this time

Cause before you there was me

Lost in another shadow and there

I stood in defeat

Maybe I’m the reason the way you love

Make me feel like it can only be me

When really I’m just another tally in your

Checkbook asking myself is this really all they see?

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Cliche as it sound I still want to be

The girl of your dreams and stand bound just to carry all the pounds of weight just

To not receive no love like I’m running

Out of bounds

The way you look at me when we’re intimate

Just to eat away the love I had like it’s a

Dinner plate just so this could be a waste

Just for you feel like the world’s great just

To be common like the rest that was ready to get inside to gate

Congratulations you had me fooled

Just another tool like come on girl

Wake up you knew what he came to do

Just so you can ask what are we really

For you say aww we just cool

The way you’re body correlates to mines like

A deep shiver down my spine this is

Just like fine wine it’s get better with time

But I never get the chance to wine and dine

Like show me the whole nine!!

But it’s okay the day you choose to

Do whatever you do but me and you

Now I feel I have to cut you loose

Before you there was me now

I have another story to tell so what are

We really?

Am I your prize to your friends

Knowing this cycle will never end

Break away from all the sins we

Just commend just to be a start

Of a new trend now questioning my

Worth because you wasn’t trying to see

Me win like you were In the beginning.

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June 2026
14 Sun

Received a critique
on Your Visionary from @Geezer
"say that I feel much different than the A.I. about this. It has all the emotional stuff in there; it just isn't connecting. Do as the A.I. says, strip the stanzas one at a time, down to the bare idea, then start rebuild…"
13 Sat

Received a critique
on Your Visionary from @victorezike123
"Nice emotional poem"
13 Sat

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