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Richard Milne
Member since March 27, 2023
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Reflections
Somewhere deep in the keep of your heart
a hidden chamber
you kept your love locked away
seldom letting it out to play
Every morning I wake with a song in my head
words and music
reminding me of things we did and said
before you went away
Reflections on the water
reflections in my mind
can’t yet fathom what’s in front of me
but see what’s been left behind
Dusk has settled in
the wind has become a gentle breeze
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pondering the times we had together
and all the love so sweet
This day has been like so many others
but now in twilight I remember
this is the day the Lord has made
and every breath a treasure
Something is telling me
you may not be far so far away
the dream I have may be coming together
so I’ll watch for you coming this way
Reflection in the mirror
recollections in my mind
remembering how we looked together
and all the times we tried
Night has settled in
the stars are shining bright
I pray the Lord is keeping you safe
and bringing you home to me tonight
Richard Milne’s timeline
- December 2025
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07 SunReceived a critique
on Whenever you come into view from @Leslie
"We all need someone like this, but we can't always have what we want. WE go on wether or not we get what we need most! This only my view!" - August 2025
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01 FriReceived a critique
on Reflections from @Geezer
"that this could be about or from anyone of those mentioned musical artists. I tend to agree with the A.I. in that you might make this smoother with the trimming up of some lines and maybe avoid the dismal side of the su…" - July 2025
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28 MonReceived a critique
on Spartan standoff from @Candlewitch
"hello Richard, I would say that it is not... this outpouring shows your ability to write, expressing your true feelings. maybe you just need a few days break to refresh yourself? my favorite lines are: At a standstill a…" -
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- June 2025
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29 SunCritiqued
"The Other Side of the Door" by @BlueSkies
"Enjoyed your poem. The sparse/strategic use of words and spare style make it an easy and yet compelling read. Nicely done." -
28 SatReceived a critique
on Up With the Sunrise from @Geezer
"like you are describing the thought processes of many a poet. I think that you have captured the essence of what it takes to give birth to the written word. Nicely done sir. I was particularly impressed by the first sta…" -
28 SatNew follower
@Geezer
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28 SatCritiqued
"Heavenly Conversions" by @Punkyfrewster
"It appears you made some edits based on the AI critique (i.e.: deleting the reference to an astronaut). I would have liked to see that, but respect your decision as you must have deemed it good advice. In general I tend…" -
28 SatCritiqued
"Give it to me" by @poetaldo
"I appreciate the imagery, and the perspective gained from reading new works. Keep at it." -
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08 SunReceived a critique
on Grand Avenue Park from @Alex Tanner
"A very evocative piece. Makes one think of one's own places and events in years oh so long gone. A worthy win. Alex" -
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- May 2025
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17 SatReceived a critique
on Rain City Rondo from @Lavender
"Hello, Richard, I feel the blues here, feel those soggy gray skies. You got the blues, Baby! Well done! L" -
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- April 2025
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16 WedNew follower
@Candlewitch
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12 SatCritiqued
"( title to follow )" by @crypticbard
"Candlewitch nailed it -- the imagery in your poem is stunning, and the whole of it prompts many questions. Sending you positive thoughts through the ether." -
11 FriCritiqued
"Smelling Memories..." by @Geezer
"... your gift with the rest of us, Geezer. I enjoyed the imagery of this latest prize-winner. Found the AI critique a bit "amusing". Been subjected to a few of those (though most often the computer/algorithm says it can…" -
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- March 2025
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15 SatContest commendation
Neopoet Weekly 03/09/25 to 03/15/25
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- February 2025
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- December 2024
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- April 2024
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21 SunCritiqued
"Desert Wonders" by @William Lynn
"William: As someone who spends at least four months a year in a desert environment, I enjoyed Desert Wonders quite a bit. The critique by AI, as is often the case, was annoying and seemed completely devoid of soul and h…" - March 2024
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27 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2023
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02 ThuCritiqued
"Killing Halloween Again..." by @Geezer
"Thank you Mr. Prolific for the life you bring to this website. I enjoyed Killer, Skeleton and your other recent offerings, and see that you've impressed the official reviewers to win two more awards -- congrats. For som…" - October 2023
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22 SunNew follower
@William Lynn
- April 2023
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11 TueFirst critique offered
on "NOT SO LONG AGO" by @William Lynn
- March 2023
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31 Fri
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31 Fri
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30 ThuFirst publication
Grit (since unpublished)
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27 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 3 days later.
About Me
About me
A US Army veteran, former journalist, communications consultant, press secretary, and freelance writer. Three self-published books of poetry, "Tualco Tales," "'T Ain't So Joe and Other Ruminations," and "Up With the Sunrise," all available via Amazon.
Location: Whidbey Island, Washington, USA
Recent Work
Up With the Sunrise
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Streaming
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Rain City Rondo
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Musing
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Zimmerman's shadow
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Henry
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Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
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| Grand Avenue Park | Neopoet Weekly 06/01/25 to 06/07/25 | – |
| As pelicans fly by in loose formation | Neopoet Weekly 03/09/25 to 03/15/25 | – |
| Christmas Lost and Found | Neopoet Weekly 12/15/24 to 12/21/24 | – |
| Grit | New Member Contest March 2023 | – |